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France X Reader  - Je t'aime

As you took a seat near Antonio, you felt a small hand stroking your back.   A bit surprised at this, you looked back to face a man with blonde hair, what looked like a beard, wearing a dark purple coloured suit.  ''Francis?'' you asked squinting your eyes as you looked at him.  ''Ah Mon Amour~ you finally realized it was me'' he reaches his arms wide open to attempt a hug and kiss but you turn around and returned your attention on Antonio.  Francis fell to the ground, his face kissing the floor.  ''So Antonio, what brings you to a place like this?'' you asked, ignoring the loud thud to the ground.  Antonio turns to you and smiles, ''Life's been really depressing lately for everyone you know?  It's the people around me that get me down… so I decided to come here.  I don't come here often, but it's not that bad'' he laughed.  ''I guess you're right'' your face brightened red at his smile; you fell for Antonio as soon as you knew him.  He was such a good guy; he was honest and you never saw the smile leave his face.  As you began to look at his face again, you caught his hand on another woman's shoulders.  He smiled as he introduced this woman to be of his ''love''.  Your heart sank as you heard this.  ''Love…. You guys look really cute together~'' you lied.  Your smile began to fade.  ''You know actually, it's getting really late, I'm gonna leave for today.  I'll see you later maybe, okay?'' you told Antonio as you grabbed your bag on the counter.  You began to make your way to the exit of the bar.  Tears filled your eyes as you went out.  You tried your best to keep them from dropping, but you couldn't help yourself.  ''His love… she's really beautiful.  I bet she's more beautiful than me…'' as you turned back to glance at the bar, you saw a man with silver coloured hair enter.  He was loud and announced that ''the Awesome me has arrived!''.

You began to keep walking through the dark streets alone.  More tears began to fall as you continued to think about Antonio.  You stopped to look around; you turned left and saw your reflection in the mirror.  ''Ugly… that's how I feel… I feel so ugly… I am ugly…'' you were enraged.  You began to walk more sternly, attempting to comfort yourself by telling things such as ''he's not even good enough for you'' or ''he was too blind to see how much you loved him''.  All those didn't work.  After a while, you continued down the roads and decided to commit suicide.  You stopped for a bit near a busy boulevard.  ''If I do this… then no one will really care about me anyways… right… that's good'' you took a step, looked both ways and decided to keep on walking.  You heard cars beeping in the streets and as you looked to your right you saw a bright light.  For you thought was the end of your life, you bent down on your knees, closed your eyes, and screamed.  ''__________! Mon amour, what are you doing in the streets like this?  You would've gotten hit; you would've been killed'' states a man with a French accent. By this you knew this was Francis.  ''Leave me alone Francis… I want to die…'' you covered your ears and began walking away towards the other cars.  He stopped his car and got out, chasing after you.  Before you walked towards the front of a huge bus, he stopped you.  ''Don't do this… who else would I give these lovely fleurs to?'' he took you by the hand and took you to his car.  ''I'm not going to hurt you…'' he told you honestly.  You sat in the passenger seat near him as he drove.  ''Tell me what's wrong Mon amour'' he glanced over at you.  You sat there quietly.  He began to frown a bit as he looked over at you. ''I know that you think I am a pervert, but I tell you that I am not!'' he sighed, ''if only you knew how much you mean to me…''   You stayed quiet crossing your arms over your chest.  You hated him, you hated Antonio, and you hated everyone.  ''Ah you know… when I saw you it was le coup de foudre'' he sighed.  Tears began down your eyes again as you started out the window.  ''Now now, Mon Amour don't start crying again… here I will say it…'' he stopped the car near your house.  He took you in his arms; you couldn't fight it.  He was the only one that cared left.  You cried into his shoulders.  He ran his fingers through your hair and patted your back.  ''_________.... Je t'aime'' he held you closer.  Your heart pounded, ''Je t'aime… that means… I love you…''

''and I mean it…'' a smile was put on both your faces.  You hugged him closer. ''Moi aussi, Je t'aime…''
This is my first story with Francis so I hope I did a good job! Please tell me if there are any errors with the French in here! Any spelling errors and such!

Characters belong rightfully to Hidekaz Himaruya
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MetricScenie Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You know what I hate? I saw this and instantly fell in love with it and then I read some other France X Reader insert and it literally sucked so bad. France was so OOC. Then I saw that your story had like, 100 less favorites than it. IT JUST PISSES ME OFF THAT GOOD STORIES LIKE THIS DON'T GET AS MUCH ATTENTION AS THE SUPER SUCKY ONES. LIKE, WTH?!?!?!?!?
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faerismoka Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
May I ask, is this the France x Reader I requested? :)
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Student Writer
I cannot remember, but I would say that it is :)
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faerismoka Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you thank you!~ :thanks:
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student Writer
There's no need to thank me xD
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BeneathTheShadows1 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ASDFGHJKLL GLORIOUS.
Let me hug you~
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Student Writer
*gets hugged* :D
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BeneathTheShadows1 Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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Codex-Sanctimonia Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I NEED MOAR *was dragged into story*
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Student Writer
XD I will make moar :)
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anneanddibforever Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
This is really sweet! I have secret dreams about me and France sometimes (take it how you will xD) so this makes me feel like he's really there with me! Thank you so much!
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012
whoa there hun....XD (*hiding the fact she does too*)
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anneanddibforever Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
Ohoho~ xDDD
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
lol
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:iconanneanddibforever:
anneanddibforever Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
Ohoho~ xD
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student Writer
You're really welcomed :)
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Eathran Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Mon amore is a mix between french (mon - EN my) and italian (amore - FR amour - EN love)

Plus you should take out the "des" of the "des fleurs"

And why should the French be perceived as pervert? We are less puritain, that's it!
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you for your help! :D and I'm not sure, I don't think that the French are perverts at all! But Francis ;) haha~
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Eathran Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
(then Americans) :)
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strangerandstranger Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
ha ha perfect timing for me since i gotta learn French now!
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student Writer
XD is that so? I wish the best for you! :)
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strangerandstranger Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
ha ha thank you!
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome :)
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Cilangrassgymleader Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconawplz::iconhyperplz::iconeeeeeplz:
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you :D
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Cilangrassgymleader Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
:D
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HiraSaru Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student General Artist
I acted probably more like Francis than the reader here. xD
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Writer
haha :D
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
....:iconsobplz: it's so sad and sweet!
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you :D
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
so adorable...i knew Francis could be a sweetie.
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Writer
I knew too! :D After this story, I started liking him as a my favourite now :D
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol. he's cute too. lol. GAH SO MANY HOT HETALIA GUYS! SO LITTLE TIME!
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Writer
lol ikr! XD I was thinking the same thing!
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yep yep. lol.
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RagunaFangirl Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I said this out loud:

SO CUTE!!!! *screams* SOOO CUTEEEEE *screams again*
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Writer
XD Thank you very much :)
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RagunaFangirl Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
NO. Thank YOU!
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student Writer
:D
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akatsuki4eva Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
Aw <3
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you :D
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ThexDarkenedXLight Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Artist
Cute~! Je l'adore!
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Writer
merci beaucop<< Is that right?:D
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ThexDarkenedXLight Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Artist
beaucoup* (So close! Almost had it!)

Avec plaisir~!
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Writer
XD
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ThexDarkenedXLight Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student Artist
Learning français, are we?
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student Writer
Yes a bit~ :D
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ThexDarkenedXLight Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student Artist
C'est génial!
This is my first year doing an independent study. I also am learning Spanish and Japanese
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ChibiHoshiKai Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student Writer
That's really good for you :D I only know some spanish but I'm learning it in my spare time. After doing these stories I learn from google and little by little I learn the language. I have more knowledge of Japanese but I hardly use it to speak.
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